Monday, May 14, 2012

Safi's Short Story Proposal

Exposition: Ariel is a mermaid and princess of Atlantica, an under water kingdom ruled my her father, living the high life with her friends Sebastian and Flounder. Much fun is had. Inciting incident: Ariel can't find her magic seaweed anywhere and it wasn't even hers and she has to give it to its rightful owner the next day!!!!!! Rising Action: Ariel, Sebastian and Flounder look everywhere but they can't find it. Sebastian thinks Ursula the sea witch stole it so they must venture to her lair and retrieve it. Climax: After a pretty quick journey they get to Ursual's place where accusations are made, a confrontation is had and a fist fight ensues. Falling Action: They get the seaweed and swim as fast as they can back to Atlantica so they can meet up with Ariel's friend in time. Resolution: The seaweed is returned and Ariel is going to make more of an effort to keep an eye on her belongings.

4 comments:

  1. I cried. Thank you for this.

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  2. Maybe make the climax more dramatic

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  3. Why don't you make your climax more dramatic?

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  4. You should explain the importance of the seaweed more, since the story revolves around that.

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