Monday, May 14, 2012

Brian's short story

MEGA ROUGH
A mercenary is hired by a terrorist  group with ideas of bombing town square on a day of festivities. The man accepts the job without feelings of guilt or remorse, for the job pays $200,000. The day of festivities arrives, and a squad is sent out get the job done. But just as they are planting the bomb, feelings of guilt hit the man, triggered by an epiphany of some sort. The man then questions how he is going to get rid of the bomb, which has a set timer...

7 comments:

  1. What country is this in?

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  2. i feel like there needs to be more exposition on the mercenary's character. also who is hiring him, and why do they want to kill these, unamed people, in an unamed country. also what does he do once he has realized this, does he run, hide, die, rebel, conntinue, these questions need to be answered!

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  3. so to answer all your questions regarding my brilliant story, the story is going to be very general as to suggest that it can occur anywhere in the world. I guess you'll just have to stay tuned to find out what happens... Aaron

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    1. while implying that it could happen anywhere is all well and good, there do need to be some details, you arent Pinter for gods sake!

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    2. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harold_Pinter

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  4. wow this guy just totally stole my idea. I oughta sue him

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  5. Yeah Brian, you arent Pinter for gods sake! #TeamAaron

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