Sunday, May 20, 2012

First Page


              The wind was blowing harshly, the ground was covered in a thick blanket of snow. A small 
stone creature can be seen walking the back streets and side alleys of downtown vancouver on these 
nights. He does not have a name, but people call him Jim. Jim loves these cold nights, people stay in their 
houses and the streets are his. While walking he notices a strange shoe print in the snow, one he has never 
seen before, it intrigues him. He takes a closer look and can tell he has not seen it before because the shoe 
it comes from a different land, a land he has only heard of... America. Jim is frightened because he knows 
america is a place filled with evil, so he investigates. Jim stiffly moves through the snow following the 
tracks the beach. As Jim looks around he notices a strange man sitting on a log. Jim begins to approach 
the man when suddenly, the sun starts to come up. 


              FLASH! Jim is frozen....

 A couple hours later Jim is awoken, he knows he the man has left, but he has no clue where. 
He begins to walk along the beach, a place that is familiar to him, Jim was built on the beach by some 
kids long ago... this was his home. But now, this place was tainted... by an american. It sickens him and 
he throws up all thats in his stomach, sand. Feeling terrible Jim decides to get a drink, so he goes close 
enough to the ocean to take a sip....

1 comment:

  1. Great start.. would love to hear more about Jim... he sounds like quite the unuchchuck if you ask me...

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